I finally got around to downloading this, and I think I can help with a couple of things:
An addition to the first page that might be useful: When you kill an apricot, the mini apricot that is initially on the left is the one you kill first.
Also, a few orders:
89: 2nd from lowest pear, the 2 pears just above it (left one being first), top pear, bottom pear and finally the kiwi
(not sure how this one can be put into your notation)
92: A Pn O DP UP Ly
96: UMAp DLAp DRAp URAp, ULAp, BMAp
Those were from
Hammerhelp.
I also know from videos that:
51.5: ULT DRT DLT URT DLAp DRAp
82.1: DRLy ULLY ULap Map DRap
82.4: the 3 pears are before the 3 kiwis, but I can't be any more specific than that.
Finally, you come out of PD 33 on 33, and I can confirm 0 to 0, 2 to 11 are correct.